The Bunny Bacchus (mr_wombat) wrote,
The Bunny Bacchus

apologies to anyone getting this in a cross posting manner:
I've just finished the fouth faction for the RPG I'm writing, "the Shop", a philanthropic mercenary organization based very loosely on.. well any of a dozen similar cliches in various games and books.
I'm too tired to do it now but tomorrow with any luck I'll compile all four groups' descriptions into PDFs and put them up somewhere for people to download and take a look at. What I'd ask of anyone who does download them is that you post any comments or feedback about them up here or in my unholywars LJ and please, be as brutal as you can, they're first drafts (about 1000-1200 words each) and rough ones at that and probably need a metric assload of correction and refinement before they're looking halfways decent. Don't spare my feelings, if you think it's poorly written shit then say so, otherwise I'll just end up embarassing myself by releasing poorly written shit to the world in general, and I'd rather not be that guy who walks around all proud of his creation, all the while with people talking about how dire it is behind his back. God knows there are enough of them in the world already without one more.

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